Avert eye, sing
half to the moon
beyond exception
twist right at the top
with lower left
helical bundle flexed
disconnection, broken
thoughts collect
moted drift dust
wept away
across mist notes,
broken strings
Thursday, September 14, 2006
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7 comments:
well worth the wait steve
loved it
especially that last stanza
thank you
I'll have to come back to this one again... then probably again and again... Good to see your muse is back.
I like the sudden first two lines and the last two to provide a contrast
very nice work!
Complex.
Finally!! Agree with Floots, well worth the wait!!
floots - not trying to create suspense, simply out of gas for a while. Needed a rest.:)
ryan - thanks for checking back!
plus ultra - I appreciate your comment - thank you.
andrew - thanks!
masago - it does come out that way sometimes - thanks for the visit.
pat - maybe my muse out - i don't know - she didn't leave a note.:)
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