breath
delivers the fuel
of a lifetime
tomorrow, mañana, demain
how they whip by
rewriting forgotten lines
brief candles flicker
a nod to the great poets
and then out, and out
Thursday, September 28, 2006
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9 comments:
Excellent write! Very powerful!
i love these few breaths :)
very nice! I like the last line--
aurora - thanks so much :)
natalia - I appreciate these words.
polona - thank you for that one
andrew - now I think it must be the Frost influence - "and miles to go before I sleep, and..."
You surprise with just a few words, thats the stuff of really good poetry
Yes, excellent choice and arrangement of words to convey a relavent topic.
"breath
delivers the fuel
of a lifetime"
It does indeed Steve. Good one!
nice
plus ultra - such an encouraging comment - thank you!
masago - it borrows a lot from some classic lines - thank you!
don iannone - thank you - thankfully the cost for this fuel remains about the same.
kai - hope you had a nice birthday - and thank you!
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