The too-long pause
awkward by definition
and waiting without purpose
Lord, give my mind
the strength to love
when I'd as soon turn away
There, there...
get some rest now
tomorrow will wait
while you turn again
Thursday, March 01, 2007
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8 comments:
sad and strangely beautiful
it captured certain corners of my life perfectly
thank you steve
Timing is what someone else has not me.
Wonderful, Steve
Best wishes
Annie
floots - nicely said - thank you :)
annie - some people seem to have it, don't they? It's a skill or a gift or something like that. I'm more familiar with awkward, I think. (how many other words have a "wkw" sequence in them?)
My words are so often badly timed, they produce the opposite of love. Hits home!!
Awww! This is moving.
pat - I sure don't claim to be especially good at it, either. Can be impressive to see someone else do it well, though.
aurora - thank you :)
i thought i'd left a comment here but blogger's been bitchy lately...
i can relate to that... well done!
polona - yes, I've also had blogger glitches - maybe another timing issue...
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