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Saturday, May 05, 2007

Can I reach
holding out for somebody
but all need to go

And me
quiet by the door
thoughts unspoken

By the millions
each one knows
which way is up

Annie Wicking said...: I love this, though, only short it speaks volumes... of loneliness & sadness.

best wishes

Annie; May 06, 2007 4:17 AM
floots said...: i agree with annie
it's those unspoken thoughts which guide and confuse us
always good to read a new one steve
thanks; May 06, 2007 4:54 AM
steve said...: Annie & floots - thanks - pretty common, isn't it?; May 06, 2007 8:10 PM
polona said...: this is powerful!
the feelings many of us are familiar with...; May 07, 2007 2:23 PM