Saturday, February 09, 2008

Up for Air

Could I lift this orange
peel off that peel package
and segmentally munch it away

yes, and of course I think of you
with that left over longing
wonder again what happened

the peeling's gone
we know it's not on
and I would have shared some

3 comments:

floots said...

the bittersweet taste of orange and regret
nice one steve
thank you

Neetee said...

Wonderful!

The description of tactile joy and the remembrance of its absence is done so well here.

Thank you.

steve said...

kai - thank you :)

floots - we usually get mixtures, don't we?

queen neetee - so nicely said - thank you