Saturday, October 14, 2006

Action, Missing in

The spoon clinks
on the cereal bowl
teeth grind the meal

Gray dawn awakes
rosy tints survive
and I remember

to write

6 comments:

polona said...

lovely snapshot from life!
like aurora, i'm glad you wrote it down. :)

steve said...

aurora - thank you - encouraging!:)

polona - it's so nice to find this kind of comment - thank you!:)

Masago said...

The fingers click
on the laptop keyboard
eyes read the poem

Black night dulls
bright pixels flash
and I remember

to read


...enjoyed. :-)

steve said...

masago - I like that very much! Nicely done.

Masago said...

My pleasure.

floots said...

so right
to write
it#s about the only thing i remember to do
keep it up