there aren't many promises
left in the box -
a few - but mostly
picked over already
go back a few generations -
before cars or so -
was it different?
how can we tell?
the squirrel climbs
unconcerned
flicking its tail
against the sunset
Thursday, October 05, 2006
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8 comments:
Nothing new under the sun, just different people figuring that out!!
something to think about -- nice
good for the squirrel!
love it!
A relevant topic efficently and artistically framed. Enjoyed.
The squirrel flicking its tail against the sunset..lovely imagery, bringing the poem to its highest, lovely
pat - so true - rediscovering classical themes in real time
andrew - thanks
polona - there's one about that keeps me from drifting off too far into sunset musing:)
masago - sure things seem to get harder to find - but I guess that often happens
aurora - thank you - I like writing facing out of the window where ideas can combine. (Nice hiking scene!)
plus ultra - good to enjoy what is there - thank you for your sense of imagery.
liked this steve
i feel much the same
but
take especial delight
when i do find something
which hasn't been picked over
(the rest of the time - like you
i watch the wildlife which seems "unconcerned")
:) thought provoking
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