And when I think I will
but don't
the silence emphasizes
that this was never
what I wanted
ice cubed
aesthetic
wandering lonely
like a clown
half dressed
in the end
the love you take
was all yours anyway
although you had me
wondering
Saturday, November 17, 2007
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7 comments:
Good one, Steve.
I really like this! Hope you've been o.k., Steve.
sad and thoughtful
love the way you've put this together
and
wandering lonely like a clown made me smile at the ironic wordsworth
(thanks for your kind words on the nasra blog)
cheers
Nice one..
Take care
Steve I love the last line. Well done!!
aurora - thank you
andrew - thanks - been kind of busy with family stuff...
floots - you're very welcome - here's hoping for words that are worth lying on the couch to think about
samrina - thanks for the note
pat - :)
Hi Steve,
Your poetry is wonderful and has me thinking about them long after I have read them.
Best wishes
Annie
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