Sunday, April 09, 2006

Ripple Effect

Borrowed sun-distant form
seals over half the year
clearly congealed and smooth

Long day edge-wise remover
reveals the rippling melody of light
a fluid dance from farther shore

Such brightness freely taken
I turn and look for you
and all that it can tell

4 comments:

Anonymous said...

thanks - ice-out on the lake today, lovely to see the sun on the water

Pat Paulk said...

Yes, a beautiful moment to share!!

floots said...

ripples should be seen and heard
(why didn't i have ripples instead of kids)
nice one

Capegirl said...

i thought this was FABULOUS.