Tuesday, March 14, 2006

Moon Distance

full moon tonight
travel here
by cloud

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an improvement
offered by aa -


full moon
tonight...
cloud travel

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7 comments:

Nick Zegarac said...

Eternal and strangely erotic - delves into the passion of a wanderer returning or following the lonely moon on to both their destinations. Great stuff.

steve said...

nick - i've had a heavy dose of chaucer the last day or so, this is what came out and somehow seems familiar from years ago. thanks for your comment - i really like magnapoets and also the crabby critic, lots of wisdom there!

floots said...

beautiful

Russell CJ Duffy said...

beautifully minimalist

steve said...

floots - thank you - woke up early with the moon peeping through a crack in the blind. your words encourage.

steve said...

cj - welcome - and thank you.

steve said...

aurora - thank you - I appreciate your willingness to make the suggestion. This is more compact and still carries the thought aloft.