Thank you Pat! - I'm a little embarrassed at having put this on Magnapoets, seems 'not up to standard' as far as poetic expression goes (sounds kind of like a commercial)...need to work on the balance of 'pretty picture' and something significant to say.
aurora - thank you so much, for both the note about the picture and poem and also the alternate construction of the poem - with more impact at the end.
I find myself thinking of haiku form at work, especially for short emails.
There is always
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Beautiful!!
Thank you Pat! - I'm a little embarrassed at having put this on Magnapoets, seems 'not up to standard' as far as poetic expression goes (sounds kind of like a commercial)...need to work on the balance of 'pretty picture' and something significant to say.
glorious
aurora - thank you so much, for both the note about the picture and poem and also the alternate construction of the poem - with more impact at the end.
I find myself thinking of haiku form at work, especially for short emails.
floots - thank you - this is a nearby lake.
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